Counterspill Research Paper

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    Annotate your research. Once you’ve gathered all your research, print it out (if it is an online source) and gather post-its or anything you need to mark notes in the books/magazines you are using. This step is very important: read through your research, take notes on what you think is important, and highlight key facts and phrases. Write directly on copies you’ve made, or use slips of paper tucked into pages to mark places of importance.[3]
    • Do a thorough job annotating to make your outlining and paper-writing easier in the end. Make marks on anything that you think might be remotely important or that could be put to use in your paper.
    • As you mark off important pieces in the research, add your own commentary and notes explaining to yourself where you might use it in your paper. Writing down your ideas as you have them will make writing your paper much easier and give you something to refer back to.
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    Organize your notes. Annotating your research can take quite a bit of time, but needs to be taken one step further in order to add a bit more clarity for the outlining process. Organize your notes by collecting all of your highlighted phrases and ideas into categories based on topic. For example, if you are writing a paper analyzing a famous work of literature, you could organize your research into a list of notes on the characters, a list of references to certain points in the plot, a list of symbols the author presents, et cetera.
    • Try writing each quote or item that you marked onto an individual note card. That way, you can rearrange and lay out your cards however you would like.
    • Color code your notes to make it easier. Write down a list of all the notes you are using from each individual resource, and then highlight each category of information in a different color. For example, write everything from a particular book or journal on a single sheet of paper in order to consolidate the notes, and then everything that is related to characters highlight in green, everything related to the plot mark in orange, et cetera.
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    Construct a preliminary bibliography/references page. As you go through your notes, mark down the author, page number, title, and publishing information for each resource. This will come in handy when you craft your bibliography or works cited page later in the game.

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    Identify the goal of the paper. Generally, speaking, there are two types of research paper: an argumentative research paper or an analytic research paper. Each requires a slightly different focus and writing style which should be identified prior to starting a rough draft.
    • An argumentative research paper takes a position on a contentious issue and argues for one point of view. The issue should be debatable with a logical counter argument.
    • An analytic research paper offers a fresh look at an important issue. The subject may not be controversial, but you must attempt to persuade your audience that your ideas have merit. This is not simply a regurgitation of ideas from your research, but an offering of your own unique ideas based on what you have learned through research.
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    Determine your audience. Who would be reading this paper, should it be published? Although you want to write for your professor or other superior, it is important that the tone and focus of your paper reflect the audience who will be reading it. If you’re writing for academic peers, then the information you include should reflect the information you already know; you don’t need to explain basic ideas or theories. On the other hand, if you are writing for an audience who doesn’t know much about your subject, it will be important to include explanations and examples of more fundamental ideas and theories related to your research.[4]

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    Develop your thesis. The thesis statement is a 1-2 sentence statement at the beginning of your paper that states the main goal or argument of your paper. Although you can alter the wording of your thesis statement for the final draft later, coming up with the main goal of your essay must be done in the beginning. All of your body paragraphs and information will revolve around your thesis, so make sure that you are clear on what your thesis is.[5]
    • An easy way to develop your thesis is to make it into a question that your essay will answer. What is the primary question or hypothesis that you are going to go about proving in your paper? For example, your thesis question might be “how does cultural acceptance change the success of treatment for mental illness?” This can then determine what your thesis is - whatever your answer to the question is, is your thesis statement.
    • Your thesis should express the main idea of your paper without listing all of your reasons or outline your entire paper. It should be a simple statement, rather than a list of support; that’s what the rest of your paper is for!
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    Determine your main points. The body of your essay will revolve around the ideas that you judge to be most important. Go through your research and annotations to determine what points are the most pivotal in your argument or presentation of information. What ideas can you write whole paragraphs about? Which ideas to you have plenty of firm facts and research to back with evidence? Write your main points down on paper, and then organize the related research under each.
    • When you outline your main ideas, putting them in a specific order is important. Place your strongest points at the beginning and end of your essay, with more mediocre points placed in the middle or near the end of your essay.
    • A single main point doesn’t have to be kept to a single paragraph, especially if you are writing a relatively long research paper. Main ideas can be spread out over as many paragraphs as you deem necessary.
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    Consider formatting guidelines. Depending on your paper rubric, class guidelines, or formatting guidelines, you may have to organize your paper in a specific way. For example, when writing in APA format you must organize your paper by headings including the introduction, methods, results, and discussion. These guidelines will alter the way you craft your outline and final paper.[6]

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    Finalize your outline. With the aforementioned tips taken into consideration, organize your entire outline. Justify main points to the left, and indent subsections and notes from your research below each. The outline should be an overview of your entire paper in bullet points. Make sure to include in-text citations at the end of each point, so that you don’t have to constantly refer back to your research when writing your final paper.

  • WRITING A SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH ARTICLE

    | Format for the paper | Edit your paper! | Useful books |

    FORMAT FOR THE PAPER

    Scientific research articles provide a method for scientists to communicate with other scientists about the results of their research. A standard format is used for these articles, in which the author presents the research in an orderly, logical manner. This doesn't necessarily reflect the order in which you did or thought about the work.  This format is:

    | Title | Authors | Introduction | Materials and Methods | Results (with Tables and Figures) | Discussion | Acknowledgments | Literature Cited |

    TITLE

    1. Make your title specific enough to describe the contents of the paper, but not so technical that only specialists will understand. The title should be appropriate for the intended audience.
    2. The title usually describes the subject matter of the article: Effect of Smoking on Academic Performance"
    3. Sometimes a title that summarizes the results is more effective: Students Who Smoke Get Lower Grades"

    AUTHORS

    1. The person who did the work and wrote the paper is generally listed as the first author of a research paper.

    2. For published articles, other people who made substantial contributions to the work are also listed as authors. Ask your mentor's permission before including his/her name as co-author.

    ABSTRACT

    1. An abstract, or summary, is published together with a research article, giving the reader a "preview" of what's to come. Such abstracts may also be published separately in bibliographical sources, such as Biologic al Abstracts. They allow other scientists to quickly scan the large scientific literature, and decide which articles they want to read in depth. The abstract should be a little less technical than the article itself; you don't want to dissuade your potent ial audience from reading your paper.

    2. Your abstract should be one paragraph, of 100-250 words, which summarizes the purpose, methods, results and conclusions of the paper.

    3. It is not easy to include all this information in just a few words. Start by writing a summary that includes whatever you think is important, and then gradually prune it down to size by removing unnecessary words, while still retaini ng the necessary concepts.

    3. Don't use abbreviations or citations in the abstract. It should be able to stand alone without any footnotes.

    INTRODUCTION

    What question did you ask in your experiment? Why is it interesting? The introduction summarizes the relevant literature so that the reader will understand why you were interested in the question you asked. One to fo ur paragraphs should be enough. End with a sentence explaining the specific question you asked in this experiment.

    MATERIALS AND METHODS

    1. How did you answer this question? There should be enough information here to allow another scientist to repeat your experiment. Look at other papers that have been published in your field to get some idea of what is included in this section.

    2. If you had a complicated protocol, it may helpful to include a diagram, table or flowchart to explain the methods you used.

    3. Do not put results in this section. You may, however, include preliminary results that were used to design the main experiment that you are reporting on. ("In a preliminary study, I observed the owls for one week, and found that 73 % of their locomotor activity occurred during the night, and so I conducted all subsequent experiments between 11 pm and 6 am.")

    4. Mention relevant ethical considerations. If you used human subjects, did they consent to participate. If you used animals, what measures did you take to minimize pain?

    RESULTS

    1. This is where you present the results you've gotten. Use graphs and tables if appropriate, but also summarize your main findings in the text. Do NOT discuss the results or speculate as to why something happened; t hat goes in th e Discussion.

    2. You don't necessarily have to include all the data you've gotten during the semester. This isn't a diary.

    3. Use appropriate methods of showing data. Don't try to manipulate the data to make it look like you did more than you actually did.

    "The drug cured 1/3 of the infected mice, another 1/3 were not affected, and the third mouse got away."

    TABLES AND GRAPHS

    1. If you present your data in a table or graph, include a title describing what's in the table ("Enzyme activity at various temperatures", not "My results".) For graphs, you should also label the x and y axes.

    2. Don't use a table or graph just to be "fancy". If you can summarize the information in one sentence, then a table or graph is not necessary.

    DISCUSSION

    1. Highlight the most significant results, but don't just repeat what you've written in the Results section. How do these results relate to the original question? Do the data support your hypothesis? Are your results consistent with what other investigators have reported? If your results were unexpected, try to explain why. Is there another way to interpret your results? What further research would be necessary to answer the questions raised by your results? How do y our results fit into the big picture?

    2. End with a one-sentence summary of your conclusion, emphasizing why it is relevant.

    ACKNOWLEDGMENTS

    This section is optional. You can thank those who either helped with the experiments, or made other important contributions, such as discussing the protocol, commenting on the manuscript, or buying you pizza.

    REFERENCES (LITERATURE CITED)

    There are several possible ways to organize this section. Here is one commonly used way:

    1. In the text, cite the literature in the appropriate places:

    Scarlet (1990) thought that the gene was present only in yeast, but it has since been identified in the platypus (Indigo and Mauve, 1994) and wombat (Magenta, et al., 1995).

    2. In the References section list citations in alphabetical order.

    Indigo, A. C., and Mauve, B. E. 1994. Queer place for qwerty: gene isolation from the platypus. Science 275, 1213-1214.

    Magenta, S. T., Sepia, X., and Turquoise, U. 1995. Wombat genetics. In: Widiculous Wombats, Violet, Q., ed. New York: Columbia University Press. p 123-145.

    Scarlet, S.L. 1990. Isolation of qwerty gene from S. cerevisae. Journal of Unusual Results 36, 26-31.

     

    EDIT YOUR PAPER!!!

    "In my writing, I average about ten pages a day. Unfortunately, they're all the same page."

    A major part of any writing assignment consists of re-writing.

    Write accurately

    1. Scientific writing must be accurate. Although writing instructors may tell you not to use the same word twice in a sentence, it's okay for scientific writing, which must be accurate. (A student who tried not to repeat the word "hamster" produced this confusing sentence: "When I put the hamster in a cage with the other animals, the little mammals began to play.")
    2. Make sure you say what you mean.
    3. Instead of: The rats were injected with the drug. (sounds like a syringe was filled with drug and ground-up rats and both were injected together)
      Write: I injected the drug into the rat.

    4. Be careful with commonly confused words:

    Temperature has an effect on the reaction.
    Temperature affects the reaction.

    I used solutions in various concentrations. (The solutions were 5 mg/ml, 10 mg/ml, and 15 mg/ml)
    I used solutions in varying concentrations. (The concentrations I used changed; sometimes they were 5 mg/ml, other times they were 15 mg/ml.)

     Less food (can't count numbers of food)
    Fewer animals (can count numbers of animals)

    A large amount of food (can't count them)
    A large number of animals (can count them)

    The erythrocytes, which are in the blood, contain hemoglobin.
    The erythrocytes that are in the blood contain hemoglobin. (Wrong. This sentence implies that there are erythrocytes elsewhere that don't contain hemoglobin.)

    Write clearly

    1. Write at a level that's appropriate for your audience.

    "Like a pigeon, something to admire as long as it isn't over your head." Anonymous

     2. Use the active voice. It's clearer and more concise than the passive voice.

     Instead of: An increased appetite was manifested by the rats and an increase in body weight was measured.
    Write: The rats ate more and gained weight.

     3. Use the first person.

     Instead of: It is thought
    Write: I think

     Instead of: The samples were analyzed
    Write: I analyzed the samples

     4. Avoid dangling participles.

     "After incubating at 30 degrees C, we examined the petri plates." (You must've been pretty warm in there.)

     Write succinctly

     1. Use verbs instead of abstract nouns

     Instead of: take into consideration
    Write: consider

     2. Use strong verbs instead of "to be"

     Instead of: The enzyme was found to be the active agent in catalyzing...
    Write: The enzyme catalyzed...

     3. Use short words.

    "I would never use a long word where a short one would answer the purpose. I know there are professors in this country who 'ligate' arteries. Other surgeons tie them, and it stops the bleeding just as well."
    Oliver Wendell Holmes, Sr .

    have
    sufficientenough
    utilizeuse
    demonstrateshow
    assistancehelp
    terminateend

    4. Use concise terms.

     Instead of:Write:
    prior to before
    due to the fact thatbecause
    in a considerable number of casesoften
    the vast majority ofmost
    during the time thatwhen
    in close proximity tonear
    it has long been known thatI'm too lazy to look up the reference

    5. Use short sentences. A sentence made of more than 40 words should probably be rewritten as two sentences.

     "The conjunction 'and' commonly serves to indicate that the writer's mind still functions even when no signs of the phenomenon are noticeable." Rudolf Virchow, 1928

      

    Check your grammar, spelling and punctuation

    1. Use a spellchecker, but be aware that they don't catch all mistakes.

     "When we consider the animal as a hole,..." Student's paper

     2. Your spellchecker may not recognize scientific terms. For the correct spelling, try Biotech's Life Science Dictionary or one of the technical dictionaries on the reference shelf in the Biology or Health Sciences libraries.

     3. Don't, use, unnecessary, commas.

     4. Proofread carefully to see if you any words out.

    USEFUL BOOKS

    Victoria E. McMillan, Writing Papers in the Biological Sciences, Bedford Books, Boston, 1997
    The best. On sale for about $18 at Labyrinth Books, 112th Street. On reserve in Biology Library

    Jan A. Pechenik, A Short Guide to Writing About Biology, Boston: Little, Brown, 1987

    Harrison W. Ambrose, III & Katharine Peckham Ambrose, A Handbook of Biological Investigation, 4th edition, Hunter Textbooks Inc, Winston-Salem, 1987
    Particularly useful if you need to use statistics to analyze your data. Copy on Reference shelf in Biology Library.

    Robert S. Day, How to Write and Publish a Scientific Paper, 4th edition, Oryx Press, Phoenix, 1994.
    Earlier editions also good. A bit more advanced, intended for those writing papers for publication. Fun to read. Several copies available in Columbia libraries.

    William Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White, The Elements of Style, 3rd ed. Macmillan, New York, 1987.
    Several copies available in Columbia libraries.  Strunk's first edition is available on-line.

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